| Author
|
"Cosmic Lab - Hypnotic" My first track. 145 BPM
|
Cosmic Lab
IsraTrance Junior Member
Started Topics :
19
Posts :
31
Posted : Sep 13, 2006 10:33
|
|
Psynaesthesian
IsraTrance Junior Member
Started Topics :
30
Posts :
557
Posted : Sep 13, 2006 15:12
|
Nice intro ...
Groovy... nice flow!!
good atmosphere!!
IMO needs some more fx, some more squelchy synths would be nice!
Potential to bulid an interesting story, some more characters and enhanced storyline!!
Good start!! Clean sound!!
B'om Shankara!!
  "... b'om ..." |
|
|
|
Cosmic Lab
IsraTrance Junior Member
Started Topics :
19
Posts :
31
Posted : Sep 13, 2006 15:33
|
|
Thanks for the comments! |
|
|
|
Numenor
IsraTrance Full Member
Started Topics :
51
Posts :
144
Posted : Sep 13, 2006 17:14
|
nice.....
if this is your first track then you have sence for music...
and thats goooood.......
how long did you making it? |
|
|
|
Cosmic Lab
IsraTrance Junior Member
Started Topics :
19
Posts :
31
Posted : Sep 13, 2006 17:52
|
|
3 days.. |
|
|
|
Freeflow
IsraTrance Full Member
Started Topics :
60
Posts :
3709
Posted : Sep 13, 2006 18:13
|
Numenor - the first track he shares with us, not his first track...
many people say its their first track, but they have worked for years kind of missleading.
Cosmic Lab - cool track.... though i think its too little contrast in the melodic area... and some sounds is not so interesting... not much movement in them,
the sound that comes at 03:32 and starts fully at 03:40, this sound you could make more psychedelic... it all sounds a little cheesy,
but i guess your intention is not to make a psychedelic track, but a more clubby track?
spend some more time on the lead sounds, and twist and turn them a bit more... i my self would change some sounds and expand on melodies, complementing melodies...
but do your thing...
|
|
|
|
