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Comments&feedback on my first track ever;)

FuSheProd

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Posted : Dec 10, 2008 01:56:57
This is the first track i ever made, and the only one I have made public;)

This is some sort of meditating kind of "mantra-music", with focus on a hypnotizing sound, and it´s just repeating forever:P
I think I got a song with a lot of atmosphere and feeling to it, but when i tried to make some melodies or progression, it completely falled apart and went shit:(
However, I´m satisfied, and I´m trying to get some more action next time!:D

Anyway, here we go:



Kane
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posted : Dec 10, 2008 17:00
I don't understand what you're going for on this one..trance or some kind of experimental thing or what?

As a trance track, there's no bassline and nothing interesting really happens..there have been worse first tracks, but there's just nothing to this..           You believe in the users?
Yeah, sure. If I don't have a user, then who wrote me?
Cloudwalker

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Posted : Dec 11, 2008 06:59
Hahaha. I remember my first track ever.
Brings back memories.... :-D

It's definitely an abstract mix and atmosphere...
I like the ideas, but it goes on for FAR to long.
Maybe shorten it down a bit.
Overall, Not that horrible.
It's better than my first track. hahaha.

What software/hardware are you using?
Do you plan on making more tracks in the future?

If you get some time, check out my newest song.
http://forum.isratrance.com/selfish-orange-trees-hypnotic-dub/

-CW
FuSheProd

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Posted : Dec 16, 2008 21:43
Pro Tools and Reason;)
And of course i will make more music!:D
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