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Kitnam
Mantik
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Posted : Jan 20, 2005 09:46
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yo, time to write some comment...(u asked me, so i will do)
the intro: more sounds, more new events, dont loop the same line again. the kick gets in like a drop, make some more spectacular intro, the intro is ur visting card man! some tip: use the sounds u gonna find out later in the track after finishing for the intro.
thebassline: good bass, kick fits well. i dont like the break which comes a long rolling after every 8th hit.
hihats: use more deadnotes! killer=dead
sounds/fx: ok, not bad. mabye some more deepness and room arrangement (different reverbs and delays and eqs) and more sounds would be a nice improvement.
arrangement: add some sounds at the hotspots of the track, where one bars is ending and the new one gets in (like the classical whoosh). in the dark styles you can be much more creative with such soundsthan happy tunes, do it.
anyway its time after 3 minutes for a completly new theme..
good luck! and keep on doing dude, 
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kukan-dub-lagan/ItaiTaiko
kukan-dub-lagan/ItaiTaiko
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Posted : Jan 21, 2005 05:02
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nice one mate
keep the good work
cheers
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Dj Edell
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Jan 21, 2005 05:05
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SHAMIL
Invisible reality
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Posted : Jan 21, 2005 05:40
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EYB
Noized
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Posted : Jan 21, 2005 09:39
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Yes, good!
And i think the kick is nice 
Keep it coming.
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psimon
Remote Access
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Posted : Jan 22, 2005 19:03
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i checked your track. is fine for me. style something like hux flux or like new wave from russia good shit mate. i really like your work =]
talk to this guy and check the post :
"darklife records " - his nick name on this forum
http://forum.isratrance.com/viewtopic.php/topic/52107/forum/41
first compilation from they label are compiled but i think he will love your style so maybe on the nex comp. you can release some of your tunes.
elo ziom ! |
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CLAW
CLAW
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Posted : Jan 24, 2005 01:29
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Flake_of_Freedom
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Jan 24, 2005 15:30
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i liked
good sounds
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Morax
Triac
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Posted : Jan 24, 2005 20:41
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hey djsid, and all other groovers 
the track is a bit messy for me and i personnaly into more monotonic music,
i dont want to write review of "how to change" style because everyone has his own writing.
keep on working i sure youll find a label that releases this kind of music.
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jaramogi
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jan 24, 2005 21:45
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hey,
good powerfull style, i like it alot 
maybe you need some more fx for more live, but its cool as it is
keep on !!! |
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psykoactiv
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jan 25, 2005 23:07
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dude.. ur link aint working any more man... 
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Suvrox
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Posted : Jan 26, 2005 05:21
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yes, it expired, can someone upload again? |
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djsid
Aghori Tantrik
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Posted : Jan 27, 2005 02:28
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Spindrift
Spindrift
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Posted : Jan 28, 2005 22:37
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Quite a cool track.
I like the kick drills a lot and you have quite a few cool sounds.
I feel that the bass holds the track back a bit and make it a little bit typical of much dark stuff nowadays though.
And most sounds have a little bit to much HPF squelching and should be quite a bit wider and deeper to give them more weight and depth IMO.
Bo a bit more original bassline and more mid presence in the sounds and you are really on to something.
Keep it up.
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Kwark (Ultimae Rcds)
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Posted : Jan 29, 2005 21:34
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Ok let's go 
* Shiva's groove : wow wow !! It's hard, psychedelik and dark ! Anyway, for the ones who are not afraid by this style of trance, that's a nice track. Strong bassline, psysounds coming from everywhere and a hard rythm compose this track. The mix is ok, good job Sid
* Yaga Baba : the link doesn't work, sorry.
Have a nice day and keep working
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