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Chillout/ambient tune - "The slave dance"
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motorik
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Posted : Apr 23, 2004 16:37
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This is a tune i made 6 or 7 months ago.
It's a very melodic chillout ambient tune.
I would love to hear the comments of you chillout lovers.
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http://motorik.dyndns.org/songs/motorik-the%20slave%20dance.mp3
Thanks for your time in advance.
Salute
motorik
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Anogenic
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Posted : Apr 24, 2004 02:07
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Very nice! keep it up... |
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PsYx
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Posted : Apr 24, 2004 13:55
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Hi Motorik...
I really like your dancing stuff...but this ?
I don't know...
I think the beat is too static...i think it could roll a bit more...same to the bass...
I like the pads & sounds that create the atmosphere of the track....like the hi-hat fx in the second part...
But halfway the tune...it kinda turns into a Roland keyboard demo or something...I.M.H.O.
I hope i'm not 2 hard on U...but that's just how i feel about it...
Respect,
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motorik
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Posted : Apr 24, 2004 16:20
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@dms thanks for listeninig man!!!
@psyx no probs my friend , i didn't put it here in order to get only the good comments i would like to hear , it is 100% cool what you are saying and honestly even though i really like this tune i think there might be something true in your opinion about it being too static  .
as i said this one is from 6-7 months ago and i'm sure i developed myself since then. 
Thanks for the good comments man.
Let me have some more listening to it and see if it really sound like A "roland demo " (OMG LOL) 
thatnks for listening and being honest with me , highly appreciated!!!!!!
salute
motorik
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shahar
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Posted : May 7, 2004 13:35
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nice one Motorik.
Shows potential. The rhythm is really too simple. The atmosphere and musical parts are nice. A bit too shpongly in the last minutes.
Make more, there's potntial there.
And feel free to keep me updated.
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motorik
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Posted : May 8, 2004 00:21
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@shahar thanx for the complements man
Although i understood what you meant I must take the "a bit too shpongly" as a compliment.
I will keep you informed for new stuff
@das fang thanks mate
I must say i don't see things your way about kick and structure.
sometime simple is good ,you should know that no rules for music and i can't agree with you that it needs more constuction music wise ,on the other hand i could nake some progress with the drums complexity when the tune reach it's highest level.
I tried many kicks before choosing that one and i liked how this one sound .
Anyway as i said this one is from 6 to 7 months ago and the sounds i made then is not the sounds i make today.
Thanx for your time guys
salute
motorik
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BeNDeR
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Posted : May 8, 2004 21:45
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great work with hi hats they give to the song a great touch
one thing that need more improvment is bass you need give him some life there !
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Anak
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Posted : May 9, 2004 12:05
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motorik
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Posted : May 9, 2004 23:50
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Thanx for listening and for the compliments guys.highly appreciated!!!!
salute
motorik
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Aesthetic Entity
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Posted : May 10, 2004 14:05
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awesome! this is the best i've heard so far in the new tracks section. |
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motorik
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Posted : May 11, 2004 10:22
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Wow, thanx aesthetic this is a big compliment for me ....couldn't expect for more
cheers 
salute
motorik
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Aesthetic Entity
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Posted : May 13, 2004 12:19
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i really dig the synth after the matrix sample |
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motorik
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Posted : May 13, 2004 18:48
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Yes good one indeed ...
The story behind this lead synth is that when i did it i though of a regge singer doing a solo singing with his voice ...
If you listen hard you might hear it.
thanx again mate
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Aesthetic Entity
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Posted : May 19, 2004 11:33
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heh.. cool. don't hear it though 
but the flute after the solo rocks too. shponglerific |
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