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llama.exodus
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Posted : Nov 10, 2011 00:32:49
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llama.exodus
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Posted : Nov 10, 2011 01:20
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klippel
Stereofeld
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Posted : Nov 10, 2011 13:06
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hey mate,
i like the style you have, like the first song a lot.
try to improve your mix, make the bass and kick more "glued" togehter by right eq.
then try to make the story flow really into each other, still a bit static.
also highpass some of the sounds in the first phase they seem to go down low and muddy the mix. some more variation in kick and bass and percussion overwall.
you are on a good way 
  http://www.ektoplazm.com/free-music/stereofeld-frequenzwechsel
"I've always been a believer in musical repetition to draw in the listener and make the music hypnotic. Another thing I believe in is repetition." Alan Parsons |
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llama.exodus
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Posted : Nov 10, 2011 22:53
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Hey man! Yea I need to work on mix and the eq. Thanks for taking the time to listen, feedback always comes useful from fellow music lovers.
keep up the good vibes! |
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jonsta
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Posted : Nov 11, 2011 13:20
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First track has a good ambience to it, airy pads and a lot of diferent sounds going on but the mix needs A LOT of work. Some examples that need to be fixed: 2:33 you can hear a bassy sound. It overpowers everything. You need to get that kick and bass more alive, they are barely hanging in there.
Second track has an interesting intro but again I was expecting more power from the K + B. I think this could evolve nicely into something more techy with a lot of percussion. It has a really dark feel to it too.
cheers bro and keep it rockin 
Free album out now:
http://www.ektoplazm.com/free-music/flembaz-tripalle
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D_Access
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Posted : Nov 12, 2011 23:45
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i semm both tracks lack lows, especially first one |
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llama.exodus
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Posted : Nov 15, 2011 14:09
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Again, thx for feedback! I appreciate it!! I already started some new tracks and I don't think i'll continue these but I will definetely have all this good info in mind and develop those aspects.
peace! |
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