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Posted : Jun 4, 2010 14:45:11
Hey all,
this is the first track I'm posting here.
work-in-progress... basically one evening's work so far. Consists of basic A and B section.
To-dos:
-"A" section is still going to be expanded a bit
-needs a better transition
-transition back to slightly modified "A" section after the "B" section
-EQing and mastering needs to be done
Would appreciate some feedback regarding the general sound of it...
Thanks in advance for any constructive feedback.
the fool
the fool
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Posted : Jun 8, 2010 15:03
is it that bad or why is nobody commenting?
feel free to be honest and rip it apart (constructively off course)!
Kryten
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Posted : Jun 8, 2010 15:37
Well, first of ll its waaaaay to short, but I guess thats one thing youre working on.
In general I think that track already sounds good, it just needs a lot of work still....like EQ'ing, but you already said that.(sounds a bit muddy)
For my personal taste the track is not...hmm..."spacey" enough....but maybe thats intended. I would use more delay, but as said, thats my personal choice.
Since im still a noob I cant say that much about production and stuff....Maybe I should try to make some chillout music aswell...
the fool
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Posted : Jun 8, 2010 16:23
First of all thanks for the feedback.
Yes that's only the beginning of the track and it still needs a lot of work. I just wanted some feedback on the general sound of it.
EQing also still has to be done but I like to leave that till the end.
I'll take your advice, add some delay and see how it sounds.
Anyway, thanks for the feedback and advice, I really appreciate it!
