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Cherrybombs and Icecream
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Psybro
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Posted : Oct 20, 2009 06:03:10
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carbonic
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Posted : Oct 20, 2009 23:37
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Hello mate.
The idea sounds nice to me. I think you meant it to be experimental/idm. I'm not much into this kind thus I may be mistaken. It's hard to get into the rythm with the kick and the starting bass/lead. So I would suggest you change that part. Some more hypnotic percussions, melodies would do the job...
Cheers |
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Taii
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Posted : Oct 21, 2009 00:01
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Hi:)
Nice intro:) biggest problem imho is that there is no bass, or it doesnt sound like bass:D (or is it how you wanted it?), then some parts sounds empty to me, too long without changing. Percussion sounds really crazy, just the rimshot i didnt like much, and it could change more often:) crazy track, i hope i will hear more  and i hope my suggestions helped. Cheers:) |
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Psybro
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Posted : Oct 21, 2009 00:37
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Thanks guys for the feedback, yeah it wasn't really meant to sound the way it does, i tend to create tunes and listen to them later after exporting them, CPU is intense sometimes
I have fallen into a state while wanting to create something new, it tends to be mediocre a lot of the time. Maybe its lack of inspiration and/or laziness, not doing it properly.
I wasn't expecting too much from this one, i just thought i'd share it and see how it goes.
I know there are better tunes ahead of this one
Cheerz and thanks again |
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carbonic
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Posted : Oct 21, 2009 00:56
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Yeah man keep working with passion and I'm sure you'll push the boundaries  . As old folk said 'good things come slowly' |
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