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PsyGoatDelic
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Posted : Jul 28, 2004 03:07
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Your feedbacks (hop for more) helped me alot! i edited cutted writed erased and mostly tweaked some!
check it out: http://www.o-zen.com/art/PsyGoatDelic
Speaciall 10x for DreadLord!!
Feedbacks as usual r very wellcome (helps me alot to continue working on trance)!!!
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Dreadlord
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Posted : Jul 28, 2004 15:30
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So!! here's my opinion on that one..
I know the first sketch of that track so i can say that what i have here right know is much much better!! the bassdrum is great, just like in the first sketch.. but the synth are more powerful and u can hear them better.. i like the hihats very much and the intro is also very good.. Because it is only 3:11 min. long, i hope there will come some more synth on that one!! I like this kind of trance where u have clear melodys that give the track a highlight or sth. like that..
but plz keep on working on that and hopefully u get more comments on that one than last time.. 
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EYB
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Posted : Jul 31, 2004 14:24
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Okay Psygoatdelic, the hh fits good, but now you need to 'tell the story'. The song must go on, and change, some breaks and so on.
So work and put next release here then 
Add more perc, synth and lots of effects. Signature |
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Itay_Ben
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Posted : Aug 2, 2004 06:43
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Psygoatdelic , is not my style but there are missing alot of Fx and some breaks
and more life in the track ...
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PsyGoatDelic
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Posted : Aug 4, 2004 13:39
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its just a sketch i started to make and i wanted to test it out first...
im still working on it alot and always thinking how to continue it... but im pretty stuck now, dont know how to continue with it... and wanted some feedbacks.. it helps alot to see how people react to my track...
10x for the feedback man...
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six
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Posted : Aug 7, 2004 15:03
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hi !
this is very dark (not exactly my kind of psy) ... there's a synth pad during the intro that becomes quite disturbing when the kick starts at 0:40 ... i like the percs starting at about 4:00 ...
overall i feel like you could continue it by adding leads and some more "punchy" percs ... but again this may also be a question of taste
keep working on it, there's still room in the track for your imagination to unleash
peace ...
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PsyGoatDelic
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Posted : Aug 10, 2004 12:28
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On 2004-08-07 15:03, six wrote:
overall i feel like you could continue it by
adding leads and some more "punchy" percs ... but again this may also be a question of taste
keep working on it, there's still room in the track for your imagination to unleash
peace ...
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well not a question of taste.. i wanna make more leads percs and sfx... but got some problems with my blanked mind.. forther more i still dont know how i make good sfx... if anybody can/knows how to help me ill be very glad..
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PsyGoatDelic
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Posted : Aug 17, 2004 01:18
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well 10x anyway every budy... expect more to come...
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Analog Xperience
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Posted : Aug 17, 2004 05:09
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u wrote .. : well not a question of taste.. i wanna make more leads percs and sfx... but got some problems with my blanked mind.. forther more i still dont know how i make good sfx... if anybody can/knows how to help me ill be very glad..
eheheh why ppl sometimes don't stop for some seconds and think q???
if u have a dvd player .... and u have input on your sound card .. start rekording nice sfx from movies ... then ... if u dont like does fx ...
put them ou wave lab or sound forge ... and EDIT them ... of u can even creat your own sfx .. on does programs .. with a simple sine wave ! 
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CLAW
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Posted : Aug 17, 2004 14:38
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On 2004-07-31 14:24, EYB wrote:
Okay Psygoatdelic, the hh fits good, but now you need to 'tell the story'. The song must go on, and change, some breaks and so on.
Add more perc, synth and lots of effects.
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So true... I totaly agree with EYB. How about bass... I havent heart bass in your track. I know that this is just a sample but it definately needs some low freqs
Boom
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ketzah
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Posted : Aug 20, 2004 18:01
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Ok, here it goes
1) Very nice Kick
2) Awsome Nordlead like line
3) Clean hihats, percs, etc.
4) Need to develop more motion on the track, perhaps you could add a short break through a new part, since it is a sketch right?
5) needs low freq´s
6) you could add distorted voices singing a psyline.
Very nice sketch thou!
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rOOmUSh
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Posted : Sep 6, 2004 13:29
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I think, you should do the bassline in clean stereo, not widened, so u could hear it in between the speakers like mono but stereo liked the synth @ 0:27, very cool! and yes the hihats are built beatifully, i like the way the flow. and the sound of the snare is very fit to the track. since u have posted this in 28 jul, did u develope it a little? |
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