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Candy Science
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Apr 14, 2013 16:52:09
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Candy Science
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Apr 18, 2013 01:39
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hi 
as ive not introduced me before, let me to it with this post:
im 24 from vienna, ive started trying to make music about a year ago. of course most of my results are just horrible, but slowly its getting a bit better, and its now possible to listen to that sounds ^^
it would be interessting to know what other people think about my tracks, so plz let me know if you like them or not.
Heres my newest one
https://soundcloud.com/candyscience/kara
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makus
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Posted : Apr 18, 2013 09:15
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not bad for only a year of making music. good for you.
do you like hi octave basses? i would go with an octave lower. more diversity is needed: song structure, leads are all very alike, a lot of melodies are similar to each other. despite you know all of them and can distinguish all of them, for an obvious listener they are the same. sound-wise seems like you are dialing the same parameters on different synths its better to learn a synth deeply than have 10 synths scratching the surface of their possibilities.
also despite you are making a lot of melodies it doesn't help putting more musical sense into your tracks. you need to develop the track to introduce the melody, not just play melodies since second 0 till the end. less is more. try playing with fx and pads and long notes and stabs for 1.5-2 first minutes, then introduce some simple melody, make it more complicated with time, change the flow with new bass pattern, introduce break and develop the track again but more intense. or go some other, completely different way! not sticking to genres too much is a great advice too.
ditch bad stuff instantly. bad/good sense will come with time.
good luck with music making man
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Candy Science
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Posted : Apr 18, 2013 11:24
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thx for your feedback
i know the basses are very high on this track, wanted to give the track a bit more dramatic.
the problem with the synths in this track is, that i used them for the first time; actually just was a bit experimenting with them ^^. but actually there are not that much sounds in there, only 2 synths and 1pad.
whats would you suggest to get everything out of a synth?
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Candy Science
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Posted : Apr 26, 2013 00:39
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