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Nomad Moon
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Posted : Nov 19, 2008 18:15:39
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i'm stuck and dont know where to turn,the problem is that i don't know what i'm doing wrong or right, im doing all by myself don't really have a friend or someone who make music, u put Liquid Soul on my monitor,Jesus Christ,perfect kick , the bass FEELS, the leads and pads RELEASE ,perfect master with the reverb (cant figure that out , more reverb the attack disappears , less , sound dull),and the hats and percussion ,perfect,mine seem weak if i lower the volume:disappear, if i raise them , too harsh
as said im lost , so i'm reaching to the ones who know and have the time ,give a listen to this and tell me where can i improve it, not talking about the musical talent, probably have nome, but the technical aspects of it.
sorry if im bothering u but i really wish i could sound like those guys
here's the link
https://rcpt.yousendit.com/625762330/d162266f86ec477ed19d5b326f17a343
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orgytime
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Posted : Nov 19, 2008 20:34
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aciduss
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Posted : Nov 19, 2008 21:56
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it sounds good. Im on headphones tho but i like it. Maybe you just need a little eq and compression.
Maybe you need a little more intention in drums and overall groove in order to make the track feel "fuller" not just delayed sounds and arpy synths.
Nice track man! Letme know when it is finished.
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Nomad Moon
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Posted : Nov 20, 2008 11:38
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thanx guys,i only have time to work on it at the weekend, so i'll try to make it more full, and keep u posted as it goes
@aciduss,
where did u felt it needed the compression and eq?
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orgytime
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Posted : Nov 20, 2008 14:09
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0hz
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Posted : Nov 20, 2008 15:06
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at 4:50 there is a instrument to loud.
from what i hear you put this through some mastering plugin....the sub freq are out of balance something is not tight there.
overall the mix is not bad. |
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Elad
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Posted : Nov 20, 2008 15:20
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Nomad Moon
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Posted : Nov 20, 2008 16:41
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On 2008-11-20 15:06, 0hz wrote:
at 4:50 there is a instrument to loud.
from what i hear you put this through some mastering plugin....the sub freq are out of balance something is not tight there.
overall the mix is not bad.
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The problem is my monitors only go till 40Hz so i dont have that sub control,i imagine.Sould i cut the whole mix at 40 so that i have some control?Or is there a way to keep them controled ?
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0hz
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Posted : Nov 20, 2008 21:02
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no no dont cut the mix at 40hz.
check your mix in the 30hz-60hz area the problem is there.
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orange
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Posted : Nov 20, 2008 22:00
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well at least about reverbs sounding full but the sound not missing attack.. its more a mastering aftereffect cos compression tends to make reverbs more upfront. the rest of the mix is propably good handling of eq nice stereo seperation and some clever mastering from the engineer!
 http://www.landmark-recordings.com/
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Freeflow
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Posted : Nov 21, 2008 05:05
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Cool intro, thought you could introduce the bass and kick in a more interesting way..
you can do tons of things but its really catchy and nice..
im waiting for the melody to really kick in... maybe it will when you are done.... it could be the arp that truns into a more melodic thing, or that lead sound at 03:28
maybe not introduce the snaredrum that early.. take a think about the arrangement, as its a progressive track.
you can also make the voice sample more original in some way...
also at some point add a 16th hihat to get things rolling more, but very much in the background.
but keep the track calm and moving.... 
Anyway nice music.... i like this kind of progressive trance
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Nomad Moon
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Posted : Nov 21, 2008 13:44
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On 2008-11-20 22:00, orange wrote:
well at least about reverbs sounding full but the sound not missing attack.. its more a mastering aftereffect cos compression tends to make reverbs more upfront. the rest of the mix is propably good handling of eq nice stereo seperation and some clever mastering from the engineer!
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thank u very much , thats a thing i needed to hear , i imagine that a track well mastered give it a new dimension.
Thanx guys I'm going to print this thread for motivational purpuses.
This is another version , my intention is to put the 2 toghether and make a complete track
https://rcpt.yousendit.com/627235061/c0a475072c1c76b90bf913718aa40ba0
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