minddoctorsmakeacid
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Posted : Jul 21, 2011 14:46:06
Hi guys,
I'm currently working on this track and was hoping to have some feedback on it.
As the name foresays the track is supposed to change atmosphere often but is it changing too much and can it be part of a FullOn Night set?
Mind Doctors Make Acid - Monkey Mind
There will be vocal in the intro and bridges and the last bit is the beguining of the final part of the song, I will extend it and make an outro after it.
http://www.MindDoctorsMakeAcid.com
D7uan
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Posted : Jul 21, 2011 18:26
nice track man!!! I really like tracks like this not quite morning but not quite night I usually put a track like this in a set if I begin with morning and end with night!!! I would probably start with more tracks like this and end with some real heavy night shit!
minddoctorsmakeacid
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Posted : Jul 21, 2011 19:20
Thanks D7uan,
Most of my songs are a bit like this, they incorporate both night and morning so the best time for me to play is usually in between styles but how about the rate of change in the track?
Does it put you off at some point?
Does it let you down or gets booring in some parts or does it keep an interesting danceable feel?
http://www.MindDoctorsMakeAcid.com
D7uan
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Posted : Jul 21, 2011 20:17
I think the whole track is really good the only part that gets kind of boring is from like 2:11 to like 2:37 i think its beacause of that kind of staticky growling sound maybe a more squeaky acid sound would sound better imho...i really love the drop after the bridge at 4:54 i was expecting somenthing more wild but it slaps you in the face with the drum n bassline...then it starts to get wild! nice
D7uan
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Posted : Jul 21, 2011 20:36
hey ive couldnt get out of my head what would sound nice from 2:11 to 2:37 without changing anything and I think just a simple rising effect would sound awesome and wouldnt remove any substance from the song
minddoctorsmakeacid
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Posted : Jul 21, 2011 21:26
love it so far! id say it flows enough that it could, but then again... im the kinda person that likes to change things up! but i agree with Zabot.
http://soundcloud.com/brentmalik
Don't worry about it getting stale at any part, there's plenty of noise to both occupy the mind and move the body.
At 6.13 I would use some something to accompany the "killargh" lead. If you push all the attention to it, it gets older faster. Use more samples at the end, so it keeps the freshness for longer. My humble opinion, though.
Kudos for your name, also. Very catchy!
→ Just not sure if the acid reference in the M.D.M.A. acronym fits well. Mind Doctors Make Amphetamines would be more appropriated.
On 2011-07-21 20:17, D7uan wrote:
I think the whole track is really good the only part that gets kind of boring is from like 2:11 to like 2:37 i think its beacause of that kind of staticky growling sound maybe a more squeaky acid sound would sound better imho...i really love the drop after the bridge at 4:54 i was expecting somenthing more wild but it slaps you in the face with the drum n bassline...then it starts to get wild! nice
I like that part. But I see what you mean.
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Posted : Jul 23, 2011 20:34
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On 2011-07-23 02:27, psynaptic wrote:
i liked it. it caught my attention for sure while i was off in another room...
Thanks, Im happy to hear that, it means that it works and is worth the effort.
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On 2011-07-23 19:39, Bunny Milk wrote:
The tune is AMAZING!!!
Congratulations.
It will definitely work on a dancefloor!
Don't worry about it getting stale at any part, there's plenty of noise to both occupy the mind and move the body.
At 6.13 I would use some something to accompany the "killargh" lead. If you push all the attention to it, it gets older faster. Use more samples at the end, so it keeps the freshness for longer. My humble opinion, though.
Kudos for your name, also. Very catchy!
Just not sure if the acid reference in the M.D.M.A. acronym fits well. Mind Doctors Make Amphetamines would be more appropriated.
Maybe that's just me being picky
Keep it up, man. Nice work!
Cheers Bro,
I totally know what you mean with the final part,but that was me repeting the chorus, it wasn't finished so I dobled the last part, but am now working on that chorus and everything else is mentioned here.
As for my name, I choosen it like that because that way I can make reference to both of my all time favourite drugs, although I don't take them anymore these days, but it has been the name I've been carrying arround for the last 7 years so it would'nt be conveniente to change it now.
But thanks for the suggestion bro, apreciated.
