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Methodic Marble
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Oct 10, 2005 22:58
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FaceHead
FaceHead
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Posted : Oct 11, 2005 00:35
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it said file expired
ill review it when its up could you check mine out its in new track further down
thanks
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fregle
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Oct 11, 2005 01:26
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Methodic Marble
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Oct 11, 2005 16:23
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rubal
Rubal / Soundkraft
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Posted : Oct 16, 2005 12:52
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sup man..@2.20 somethin..... maybe u should usea better groove..instead of claps...they sound bad..outshining the depth of the track..
nice build up u have there...nice bass..n kikc...
the track clips till the first 2 mins...here n there,,not constantly though..
@4.48 buld up is not clean... but after that the new synth is nice.. check the levels of the track..smal things her n there..
killer @ 5.40 bang bang bang bang..goovy
synth @ 6 too loud...tracks clippin a lot..
nice n dark..
can put in some more nicer variations in the melody,,,,dark melody...
im talkin bout..up dated sequence
will chek the other track. n get back to u.
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FaceHead
FaceHead
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Posted : Oct 18, 2005 07:09
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id say one or two of those claps would be cool for contrast but not looping like this id like to hear some more variation in the bassline and maybe a little more sepaRation between the notes but other than that rubal pretty much covered it
i like the leads you got that work on the clipping and making the track different in the beginning
-facehead
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