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camel in space, a new track
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mquirk1
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Posted : Jan 17, 2005 15:33
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well i've made another track, and would once again like some feedback on it. i think it's better then my last one at least, and i even played some flute on this one.
btw, the clipping of the hi hats through out... i'm fairly certain that has something to do with my crappy soundcard and it's inability to read fast midi tracks or something, i'll eventually mix down a version using a friends usb interface.
anyway, it's here:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/laboratory51music.htm
thanks in advance for comments. |
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Redlink
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Posted : Jan 17, 2005 20:39
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i like the flute a lot, reminds me Raja Ram playing one of his tunes in Shpongle project! As for the rest, the bassline and the kick sound kind of old school to me but is nice even like that! In the overall sounds like some kind of fast dub, electric ambient. Try to decrease a few bpm, remix it and you should get a great chill or ambient track, i would work on it in that way! 
Almost forgot, the leads and the melody sound good, but i suggest that u get a good soundcard cause the hi hats sound shitty to me! 
Keep working! I hope to hear more from you, u got good ideas! 
Have a good time all the time! |
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Hayez
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Posted : Jan 18, 2005 05:16
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very good chill.
take a few bpm from the fast part and start to move things around, like auto pan. break in 6:20 not good, keep the rhytem and add to it. overwhole great track.
"a new art came into my mind which only you can create, the Art of Noises, the logical consequence of your marvelous innovations." Russolo, 1913 |
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mquirk1
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Posted : Jan 18, 2005 16:23
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hey, thanks for the comments and the good ideas too, i will slow it down a bit and see if i can get a good result. i had always envisioned the song starting slow with the flute thing, and building up into the triplet, then into the fast 4 section.
and yeah, that damn break down at around 6:20, i've tried many different ways to lead into it, but none seem to work to well, i'll keep trying anyway.
thanks again. |
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Redlink
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Posted : Jan 18, 2005 16:29
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Keep trying and keep working on it!
Have a good time all the time! |
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NikC
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Posted : Jan 18, 2005 17:49
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I'm hearing good ideas  ...
However, i feel the track needs alot of work to get it to sound as good as you want it to!
You may have great ideas, but to express them you need to get it sounding right.
I feel particularly the kick and bass should be "tightened" because it feels like you know how you want them to sound but haven't controlled them enough to get that sound, the kick seems to have a very long tail as well.
The percussion needs some work as well, it feels as though sounds are dripping into eachother.
Still as I said great ideas... you just need to control your expression of them better 
Peace |
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