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C Slumbrous Dreams 149 bpm
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knocz
Moderator
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Posted : Dec 5, 2009 14:05:59
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Dec 5, 2009 23:56
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Mix it better then listen what u have in it and need more work on . As i hear it now all are disorder and not arranged (At the sound part) . There is lots of work ..
be more attentive and less sensitive (Work in frames and levels) - Mello place and others tools are in the second and third after the bass & kik - Do never forget ! .
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makus
Overdream
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Posted : Dec 6, 2009 21:17
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agreed to Mr. Cartel. the track is a bit chaotic and melodies are annoying because you repeat them to much without changing. i have the same mistake when make music: i feel i got nice melody and repeat them 8 or 16 times ... its no good, every sound should flow and change, it must be alive. also i had a feeling that i listen to a bunch of psy cliches gathered together.
there are good parts also, last guitar solo and rhythm sound cool, and most of the sounds are good alone. i liked wicked bass fingerings, however the sound itself is weak, it lacks something, it should have more "into your face" feeling. maybe compress it harder with higher attack and lower release.
don't give up, you definitely have a feeling. good luck 
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