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kabbalisticvillage
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Posted : May 8, 2011 00:06:23
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psyraal
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Posted : May 8, 2011 00:37
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Hey @kabba - Did my listening and thought of a couple sugestions.
1º Intro feel and first beat impact don't quite match bud. You have a self building up intro but when you launch the kick and bass combo to the dancefloor it just.. Sounds empty. Use some of the intro's sounds to make your first beat follow your intro. (I dig your kick and bass combo btw)
2º At one point you bring out my favourite weapon - Bongo/Tribal style, but i was very dissapointed because when you put the beat right back on you didn't use those bongos within your beat. Why? - Also you could use some more elements to make your tune rise and rise and then boom! 40 seconds of awesome sounds. (Just a suggestion)
Hope this helps a bit.
 
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greenball
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Posted : May 8, 2011 07:28
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Wicked man! talpa influences indeed he said it was an interesting track. i wanted this to be a short track, like a little glimpse of mine into this style hehe i was really confused about some elements and the harmony between them but seems like stuff is in order! och ja jag är tillbaka! Jag ska leta efter lektioner nu: D
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kabbalisticvillage
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Posted : May 8, 2011 17:42
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psyraal
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Posted : May 8, 2011 18:58
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On 2011-05-08 17:42, kabbalisticvillage wrote:
Who and what are you talking about..a lil confused..talpa influecnes..short track?
thanks
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Greenball is the female version of Blueball. Don't you know the copycat blueball who copies other people's posts and pastes them into random threads? Ignore him/her.
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kabbalisticvillage
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Posted : May 8, 2011 19:14
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psyraal
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Posted : May 8, 2011 19:15
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On 2011-05-08 19:14, kabbalisticvillage wrote:
ohhh.um??
ooh and thanks for ur comments..i cut a sample of the matisyahu voice sample right when the kick and bass come in and delayed so it now has power and added in the jungle loops...sounds much better
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Nice move.
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greenball
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Posted : May 9, 2011 12:05
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Nice move, mr Bond. |
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