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alfalfa
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Posted : Jun 10, 2004 17:22
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alfalfa
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Posted : Jun 14, 2004 16:05
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Nomolos(Zenon Rec.)
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Posted : Jun 15, 2004 00:21
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im sorry dude but i really cant call this a track....no build,no fx,only 3 sounds going on for 7:32 mins? what u had to "say' was said in the first 1-2 mins and then u just copied the same part 3-4 times till the end..
no sound work ,no compression,NO BASSLINE(only here and there for short times)!!
i really dont want to be harsh but this is really not a track yet....add A LOT more motives,think of a concept,add a bassline make it go somewhere and please compress that kick...its all over the place...sorry.
cheers.
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alfalfa
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Posted : Jun 21, 2004 15:37
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fair enough.......
i agree that it needs to go somewhere but what do you mean no bassline?? it plays pretty much throughout!!
there is actually quite alot of sounds going on in the background - maybe i should bring them forward?
replies on other forums have been pretty posititve but i appreciate your honesty.
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Nomolos(Zenon Rec.)
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Posted : Jun 21, 2004 21:07
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i would like to say i listend to it again(maybe in better quality this time)and though i still think the main "story" is the same one told in the first 2 mins
i did hear the bassline more this time and more FX and it sounded better.....i still would advise to compress the kick so it pulls the track and doesnt hold it.
sorry for the first review i guess i didnt stream the right one or somthing.
cheers.
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alfalfa
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Posted : Jul 12, 2004 19:57
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anyone else?
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