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stonedolphin
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Posted : Dec 5, 2011 21:02:26
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Redshift
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Dec 9, 2011 12:02
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Hey,
Pretty good for a first publication! How long have you been producing?
Are those Sylenth1 arps I'm hearing?
The new part that starts at 2:40 is too similar to the first part, I think. here you should introduce something new - you have the same arps, same basic rhythm and sounds.
The bass change at 3:30 is too abrupt. try a fall and build-up there.
Otherwise, nice energy! Keep 'em coming.
Cheers
André
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stonedolphin
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Posted : Dec 9, 2011 14:52
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Thank you for your comment, Glad you liked it 
I've been studying on an off for about 2 years now, but because this is only a hobby I can't find the time to concentrate completely on making music 
I did not use sylenth in the track...
Bass line - Cronox 2
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ierofante
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Posted : Dec 12, 2011 10:39
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Well, surely the track is somewhat pleasant, but I think it lacks a bit in originality and variety, and the overall sound remains quite the same from the beginning to the end (in my opinion).
Also, the percussion are not enough groovy and organic to me, they sound a bit too mechanical, easily influencing the overall quality.
However, for having been working on music only for 2 years as an hobby, you are good.
Can we know where the track is going to be published?
 Fire Walk With Me |
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