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Below Wonderland 145 bpm *Nbz
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Norman BeatZ
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Posted : May 4, 2006 16:41
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : May 4, 2006 17:15
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Hey ..  Whats up friend ? Well well .. New
track in the air ! . Im downloading now .. I will
listen to and then write my comment ! Peace ..
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Norman BeatZ
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Posted : May 6, 2006 14:19
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Where is all the feedback partying ?! ^o^
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Dark-Force
Dark Force
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Posted : May 6, 2006 14:52
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Nice one man!
umm....smthing doesnt connect in this one, sound is reall nice though.
it's like all this track is BACKGROUND for something that isnt there...where r the leads? melody? psychedellilca? heheh
the "sic wirdow" smple i am sure i eard somewhere else, and try putting other vocals.
it has nice flow, and i love the acoustic drums Changes, the kick (4:04) is too much...needs cleaning in EQ and not enough music in the bassline....
overall good technicall work, but u need to have more music in the track...I.E LEADS hehe
*bom*
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Norman BeatZ
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Posted : May 6, 2006 15:08
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thx alot darkforce ive been thinking the same thing, something is indeed missing, im trying to fix melodies that fits the groove without sounding amaturish but its really hard without a synth 
peace
Robin
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : May 7, 2006 01:43
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Hey robin .. This is a madness stuff very
defferent from your usuals and this is what
like .. Being opend mind to many ways , direction and styles and this track i got what i like for sure Good entering into the track .. (That talking pad and all in there ..) Realy liket some good breaks , Good metals work .. Maybe 1-2 synth up there are need . Volume balance is sound good also (You got it) continuity of pleasure and enjoy ! . Nice & good work on the fx side , Hh . Need abit 1-2 more perc'
in the air Overal BOMB .. Cheers man ! . Yoko
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Sound Surgeon
Crater / Mish-kah
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Posted : May 7, 2006 16:41
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Nice intro Robin. Though i was looking to a different beat. Nice percussion games you did there, but where is the first synth line? The first one is in 1:40, Its too much in my opinion to wait. I think it swallows the bass a little bit, or maybe are my speakers who do it. Your bass isnt so hearable in the time that this synth is playing.
I believe if you add some more synth lines and work the bass a little bit more. You can have here a good one. The rest is quite good and the theme of it is nice.
Peace
Misha
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