Been off and away from psytrance for awhile but here is the comeback
vegetal
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Posted : Jan 16, 2010 06:08:13
I´ve never posted any of my tracks under work here so i thought id try and see what feedback i could get from this section of the forum.
Please don´t be intimidated by the intro i beg you all.
Yes im drunk at the moment so bring it on! Come on!
Or as Bruce buffer from the UFC would say: "It's TIME!!!"
dj chichke
Chichke
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Posted : Jan 16, 2010 13:24
i don't like those kick shuffling like at 1:16, it's unpleasent for my opinion. maybe you just need to lower the volume of it.
you have sound you start to use at 2:10 every 2 bars. i don't like it too much. i think it would be better more quiet. and you use it too much. if you fill you have to use it for all this section so at least play with it that it won't sounds the ecsacly the same all the time.
the break at 4:00 is genious, also the part that coming after it.
Freeflow
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Posted : Jan 17, 2010 17:05
The melody is very nice!Good power in this one.
The sound that comes every second bar at 2:10 could be played with, some timestretch, stuttering with delay, reverse reverb... at some part maybe, experiment.
After the break you could go back to the start of the track, 0:45
but you should also consider how it could work with going up a half tone or just go up to something that suites... and surprise with a smackier kick at some part... You can do so much =)
Great one keep at it
Upavas
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Posted : Jan 19, 2010 10:24
I think the overall theme is brilliant! The bass and kick are a bit too much hp'ed, would be nice if it was more phat! Also b+k need to be a bit more loud in the mix. Kick is a bit dull imho but works. And yes, the sound that comes in at 2:10 needs work, variation is needed on that one... and the kick roll is outa sync near 1:16, or sounds like it! I very much like the groove on this tune. Nice ideas. Lots of feeling!
icedice
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Posted : Jan 20, 2010 17:46
Wow this is some crazy glitchy stuff...
I liked most of is but in some places it gets a little to crowded whith different sounds...
The breakdown at 4:00 is just AWSOME!!
vegetal
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Posted : Jan 29, 2010 09:44
Thanks for the input guys, perhaps your right on the high pass, i´ve been listening way to much to technical death metal and deathcore for awhile so my idea was to get alot tighter bottom and minimizing alot of the rumble bass.
Also using more tube simulators and amp simulators to achieve that. After evaluating i´ve decided to clear up some of the kickfills i´ve achieved and use ordinary kickbreaks instead of trying to complex them mathematically speaking.
About the sound at 2.10 yeah i could play some more with it.
Next stop, 145Bpm morning beat with a touch of liquid DnB
