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Bat Country(dark 148bpm) Any Comments?
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*the RAVEN*
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Posted : Sep 5, 2006 20:57
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D-Alien
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Posted : Sep 5, 2006 21:20
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wow for sure this sounds weird!
very strange bass line! the overal feeling of the trak is also weird. i perceive it as a forest trance attemp, but i think there is some misbalanced sounds. maybe a lowpass filter from 150-250hz will solve the problem. i refer to this moment 3:44 there start a synth that has too much subs that mud your kik bass.
but i think its a very cool trak as it shows liberty, and attemp to go further the bounderies!
Keep it man!
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Positive Reaction
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Posted : Sep 5, 2006 23:39
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Good synthesizer everywhere. I think kick drum and bassline could be volumed up a little and more clear, but definatley would be a good track for the forest. This track sounds live allmost, organic. I think a change in bassline near the middle or end would help allot. |
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*the RAVEN*
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Posted : Sep 6, 2006 08:46
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thanks for the comments
you are the ones who keep music alive
bOm |
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*the RAVEN*
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Posted : Sep 6, 2006 08:48
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thanks for the comments
you are the ones who keep music alive
bOm |
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Psynaesthesian
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Posted : Sep 6, 2006 10:45
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Nice idea ...
and all of the ablove !!!
sorry i'm in a bit of rush dude .. but i will send a details review in a while!!
Take care and keep kikin it~!!
B'om Shankara!!!
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point_blank
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Posted : Sep 7, 2006 01:51
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its a cool track man good idea... nice funky leads . |
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Positive Reaction
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Posted : Sep 7, 2006 08:29
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Needs more work in my opinion though. Keep it up bro  |
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*the RAVEN*
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Posted : Sep 7, 2006 11:29
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thanks for the comments.
will work on it.. |
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Cardinals Cartel
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Posted : Sep 7, 2006 11:39
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On 2006-09-05 21:20, D-Alien wrote:
for sure this sounds weird!
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Weird sounds good ..  Ill download it and write my comment soon . C ya ..
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vivan
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Posted : Sep 7, 2006 12:04
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hey man
this trak isnt bad..its got some nice sounds. but you need to work on the bassline and percussion..they sound out of sync...work at it and youll get it eventually
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*the RAVEN*
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Posted : Sep 7, 2006 18:45
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will work on the bassline..just started producing so my bassline and percussion isnt up to the mark..but will keep at it..
thanks for the comments |
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Bizzarro
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Posted : Sep 8, 2006 19:02
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good ideas
maybe prod can be better and more elements for my liking
good effort keep at it
boom
MeRrY PrAnKsTeR
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Cardinals Cartel
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Posted : Sep 9, 2006 12:39
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Hey ..
Ok , Few things :
1. Could hear a better arrangement then the last track that i listen to in here but the other 1 imo was much more good at the quality part .
2. work on the volume balance - Look whats happen in 02:18-02:20 Sound is jumping up for this few sec' and also in some other places go's down without eny special reason .
3. Dont think that the bass is weird just think his not fit and there is no living in , Its like a hu hu hu
for all over the demo , He is low and not enough dominant as a bass should be , Sound realy close
Try open in , Make it more fresh , different , hardly and strong . Cant be this way that bass is gone and disappear inside all the rest , He must being the leader with the kik and not leting the backround being in the front , remember that .
3. To many and same up chirping all over the track so after some min it can be boring . Try make all more interesting and curious all demo sound the same all over .
4. Talk pads .. Find wav , Try always working only with wav files .
5. Kik - Can be much more hard imo .
6. Where is the hh & the perc ? , Try work more with reverbs .
Heard some nice ideas in it but need alot of work ! Good luck .. |
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*the RAVEN*
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Posted : Sep 9, 2006 18:37
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cardinals cartel:
thanks alot bro for the help..
really helpful atleast now i know what to work on
thanks alot
bOm |
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