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bandarlog
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Posted : Apr 13, 2004 16:24
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bandarlog
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Posted : Apr 15, 2004 15:02
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c'mon! No reviews? |
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Posted : Apr 15, 2004 15:51
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Well, I have few notes here, don't take it too hard, after all that's the idea of this place to get critisised and get improoved...
you've got some nice melodis there... BUT, it seems like the melody is almost unchanged from the beginning of the track till its end... the track is streaming too easy without any major developments on its way and its stay like it for too long...
And where are the percoseion....? accept Kick and some hi-hats, I couldn't hear any major percoseion part any breakbeat or even sners...
About the base line, well you've picked a simple 1/8 baseline that is o.k. but the problem with this kind of baseline that you need it to have a powerfull sound incase you want it to play and do the job, and the soud you've picked is too simple... it would be a good idea to change its writing as the track progress...
You have nice ideas but you need to work a bit on the extra stuff...
Good Luck
P.S you can listen to a track I published here 2 days ago and kick my ass back... 
http://forum.isratrance.com/viewtopic.php/topic/34001/forum/26 |
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bandarlog
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Posted : Apr 15, 2004 16:04
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Thanks! And I'm used to getting trashed here if it comes to criticism That's why I like this forum btw...
You're right to some extend: the melodies aren't the same from the beginning to the end (listen good, 2-3 similar melodies, 3 completely different with completely different sound) but I should make it more varied as you say...
The bassline starts with a k-b-k but after about 2 minutes it changes to a kbbbk, I guess it's not obvious enough.
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Triptocoma
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Posted : Apr 16, 2004 12:37
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Hey bandarlog!
I listend to both tracks! and i like them both
i like your atmospheric leads in Sonic Fix! one idea would be to put some notes one octave higher or some semitones in the end of the lead line, just move or rearrange some notes so you get some variation in the end... it feels kind of locked into that space after a while.
but i like it how it is, its good stuff!
One more idea would be to remove more frequencies from the voice samples, at some point they sound distorted, i mean those in the begining.
im not in a analysing mood today so i got nothing more to add but good work m8, and keep it up 
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bandarlog
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Posted : Apr 16, 2004 15:32
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Thanks Triptocoma!
Perhaps I will put in some on octave higher notes...
About the voice sample: I like it distorted Some things need bad quality imo (ever listened to atari teenage riot?)
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AKAY
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Posted : Apr 16, 2004 15:56
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HI bandarlog
so...the drums and basslines coming good...and the track is nice for dreams on the dancefloor...its future trance from finest producer...(O_(O)...
ok this is my feedback...and give more...
Best greetz
AKAy
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