makus
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Posted : Mar 29, 2011 08:34
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hi, daniel. this is the wrong section to post such things, but i will reply.
the track is missing a lot of bass. though you have 'bass' playing, it doesnt sound the way it is intended to. kick is weak too. lacks bass frequencies a lot.
your melodies are too looped. everything is repeating all the time. why you are hitting one key all the time? there are other near that one too, they all sound beautiful. try make it more diverse. use more than one note! 
percussion... same as leads. make the rhythm more diverse with the same closed hat and snare/clap. you dont necessary have to add many perc samples, use one, but make it play the music. hihats are able to play music for you. use different velocities and rhythms. both you and your track will benefit.
i won't reply for everyone, but to be honest, i don't want to make a track with you at this point because you are missing very important things, like creating interesting melodies, rhythms and sounds.
 
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