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B-recluse ( work in progress )
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B-recluse
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : May 28, 2013 19:46:10
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smoker
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : May 28, 2013 22:04
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supergroover
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : May 29, 2013 11:20
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Hi,
I think the track is still a bit chaotic. It needs some more direction. The sounds are not coherent yet.
The hihats for example at 3.10 are too fast and chaotic. Also the lead there is a bit boring. It needs some more life.
Kick bass combo sounds good (on crappy speakers) =)
Maybe give the pads a bit more volume.
Good luck!
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Anodd
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Posted : Jun 1, 2013 14:46
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COMET SHELL
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jun 2, 2013 22:07
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great track, really trippy. im listening through headphones but i think the kick could have abit more low end punch....but that could be my headphones. |
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