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Aura Magica - Geistesflug 140 or 144 BPM
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TimeTraveller
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Posted : Jul 29, 2015 23:20:02
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https://soundcloud.com/aura-magica/geistesflug/s-FCSXI
what can I improve, especially in the mix and what do you think of it?
It is unfinished. I have some concrete ideas about the end, want to bring another additional melody. It's also even not bounced and almost unautomized, almost all is still in midi, after I'm done with all harmony I then automize more of my sounds and bounce all down to audio than I try to bring more sound design to it. That's how it is for now.
I'm happy about the critics and tips.
Greets
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RhinoCeros
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Posted : Aug 1, 2015 21:47
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hi 27 secs i think the little sound bell ting is a little loud could also have a little delay/maybe.... Hehe rather Cristal clear and spooky too  also has some cool melodies Over all really cool .... I do also think most of the leads might be 2db to loud
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nebula nova
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Posted : Aug 3, 2015 14:55
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I like the melodies and harmonics.. not too fond of some of the reverbs on the leads though, they sound a little artificial to me.. and there might be a little bit to many high mids in there.. just headphone impressions thouh. |
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TimeTraveller
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Posted : Aug 15, 2015 19:47
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Hey thanks for critics. Very interesting Thank you, so good advice.I would love to improve, but for almost 2 Weeks, my pc is blocked by a trojan :/ damn One Love. Enjoy the summer
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