At0m
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Posted : Feb 4, 2011 15:10:40
Hi there, just want your opinion on this new track i made:
Any feedback is good for me
Thanks.
At0m
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Posted : Feb 4, 2011 19:20
New one:
Atomic Future - Panic demo
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Posted : Feb 4, 2011 22:34
Hi,about first track,the bass needs to be lower 2:12 introducing is little bit boring to me,nothing is going on....like the sounds but sincerly you lost me more brakes and more tension...keep it up
About second track,love the kick&bass,nice sounds now just finish it.....introducing the leads is good thing to keep the vibe (1:45) and i think this should be the main thing for you now....keep the vibe
Ascension
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Posted : Feb 4, 2011 23:24
KB sounds good on the second one. The first lead isn't my cup of tea, but sounds good. I like the acid line that comes in at 1:44. Definitely keep working on it.
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At0m
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Posted : Feb 5, 2011 00:19
Thanks for the feedback, i'll keep working on the second track more
knocz
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Posted : Feb 5, 2011 20:37
I really think you should lower the beat channel (kick + bass) and use less compression on the track
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At0m
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Posted : Feb 5, 2011 22:08
Ok, i'll do that
I thought of that too, but no said anything about KB volume.
At0m
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Posted : Feb 8, 2011 16:26
more brakes and more tension...keep it up 
