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Ascension - Illusions (108 bpm Swamp Trance)
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Ascension
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Posted : Sep 29, 2010 05:20:46
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daark
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Posted : Sep 29, 2010 10:36
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though it was very intreging in the begining and all the sound fx are realy good and synced with the song.
the kick is something i would change there.
cause track is trippy but it does not hold you only because of that(imho). great idea i know you can work some more on sound.the track works but i think it needs to sound more "serious" in terms of production. peace i mean no insults just my imho on this
  http://soundcloud.com/magimix-1/chilling-forest-whispers
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Ascension
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Posted : Sep 29, 2010 20:00
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Posted : Sep 29, 2010 20:19
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Hi, I didnt dig the style of your track, it gets very boring, and not for bpm, its just like "dull"... (No ofence here just my opinion) Anyway technically it sounds very dirty and lacks in some freqs, specially bass ones. Percs @4:20 sound good, really like those ones, but the constant pad/atmos at the background really tired me up, its TOO saturating for the ears, maybe you should look for some more variation there 
Good luck!
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daark
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Posted : Sep 29, 2010 20:52
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On 2010-09-29 20:00, Ascension wrote:
thanks for listening and commenting.
what do u mean by "serious" in terms of production?
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i mean that it sounds kind of amateur. mostly cause of kick. bass could be easy be added later but the line is good just it is too weak in volume. i would realy love to hear that kind of thing but with some nice quality beat so it won't be that boring.
http://soundcloud.com/magimix-1/chilling-forest-whispers
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Ascension
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Posted : Sep 29, 2010 21:18
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vector_0
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Posted : Oct 2, 2010 09:07
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I like all the sounds, and respect that you are using a non-standard kick. the atmosphere of the song is quite haunting. My suggestion would be to make the song shorter, or add more fx or something. a couple parts are kind of dragging with nothing new happening in them.
keep working on developing this style!
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