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ApsyDrop
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Posted : Sep 3, 2002 19:34
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Check it out..
Waves from God and Paranoid 60's are 2 of my newer tracks.. finished writing them a coupla weeks ago.. and are finally up at my www.mp3.com/apsydrop site fore download!
I'd really dig your views on them people..
as said before.. Waves from God is a lekka cheesy track... so beware .. of the cheese...
Paranoid 60's is a bit more atmospheric.. and slightly darker...
enjoy!!
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sYnthrOid
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Posted : Sep 5, 2002 10:48
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strange man
there are some nice loops of snare
but u call it trance ?
what drugs are you on ?  |
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Kaz
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Posted : Sep 5, 2002 14:15
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ings2002: yes, this is trance. If you wouldn't be so ignorant, you'd know that stuff like this was considered the only kind of psychedelic trance for more years than progressive or full-on ever existed. And don't phrase yourself in an offensive manner (or is that some Meth talking through you?  )... Stick to reviewing the tracks, this is what this section is about. More comments like that, and you might piss off a moderator in the New Tracks section 
Waves From God: Production and structure. The elements in the track are good, but this is not done in a proffesional manner. 2:47 + is very cool
Paranoid 60s: the kick interupts the rhythm of the track - replace it. The structure is oversimplified. Production is too messy - sound is too cluttered the moment you have more than one lead. Structure could also use some improvement - there isn't enough tension or pressure in the atmosphere of the track, something which could really give it that extra punch it needs.
You're melodic talent shows in these tracks, but work on production and structure, those can make your melodic talent really shine through.
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ApsyDrop
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Posted : Sep 5, 2002 15:30
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Thanks for the comments...Kaz
Much appreciated.. and yeah.. once again.. I'll say that I'm trying my best to get my production up to scratch... but at the moment.. i'm running on a pc that's crashing on me all the time.. and a solitary blown speaker that krrr krr's all the time... so I'm having a bit of a hard time getting that squaky clean sound....
I'm working harder..and harder.. to get my structure up to scratch too..... i'm getting there... i think... picking up new techniques.. all the time.. got better flowing tracks that I'll have available ..soon.. or maybe.. not.. 'cos they may get released.....
Thanks for taking the time to listen to the tracks!
Peace!
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apsilum
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Posted : Sep 5, 2002 22:32
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I'm listening to Paranoid 60's, I don't have a problem with the structure at all, but Kaz made very valid points. So I'll leave the crit and just say that:
this is kick-ass!
(apart from the production of course! )
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ApsyDrop
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Posted : Sep 6, 2002 13:21
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Cool! |
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