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aQuaFeeLL & FuntazZia _-_ HuLk 138bpm
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aQuaFeeLL
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jun 24, 2006 23:53
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diskonekt
Fat Data
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Posted : Jun 26, 2006 13:17
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Hey man. What's up ?
This track is an improvement from the previous one but still i think there is a problem in the variation there.
You use the same patterns (do you use FL?) way too much. That said apart from changing the bassline only or puting in another synth, the track doesn't change much. For example i listen at min 1.00 and i listen again at 4.25 and apart from the different bassline everything else is the same 
The thing is you sure can make a nice track but you have to spend more time in it blending lots of different things to make it interesting!
cheers man!
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diskOtek
Entek
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Posted : Jun 26, 2006 15:34
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hey aquafeel!
nice track!
but its too repetitive!
also the snare is somehow too loud maybe?
and the melodies are too 'in your face'! 
put some reverbs on them to avoid this!
apart from these u got nice sound and good flow!
and a solid backbone with the kick+bass!
work more on some variation and ti can be great!
see you!
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spiky
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jun 26, 2006 16:43
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Just to add: more Powaaa man, u need more Powaaa. cool basline...
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orange
Fat Data
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Posted : Jun 26, 2006 18:32
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i agree with my friend panic!
despite the monotonus repetitive feeling! the first arp kinda synths are wrong note and then the rest that follows are wrong aswell! exept the guitar melody in the middle that 1 is ok in notes!
here is a tip... in the beginning of music composition try to keep all the notes same as the basslines and then go from there to find the rest notes that fit those!
overall it needs alot of work dudes try to make a loop and then make 10 variations of this loop and build your track around that!
keep working !!
orange
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