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Yellow Warrior
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posted : Oct 5, 2005 18:26
Hello All,
This is my first track ever but i've not finished it yet. I'm kinda stuck now i and desperately want to finish this!

Also, am struggling with the arrangement.

Please can someone have a listen and give me some advice??

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=414992

Thank You!

Bharath.
          Rather than feeling that you're about to have the rug pulled from under you, let me teach you how to dance on a flying carpet
Bar Litman


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Posted : Oct 5, 2005 20:20

i tryd download it but this is the massege i got


Please be patient!

This download hasn't been cleared yet. Please check back tomorrow.

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FaceHead
FaceHead

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Posted : Oct 5, 2005 21:05
like the rattles and beginning atmos maybe it comes in to fast try after "the end of the tunnel" let the effects trail off and put in a slight sweep or build its building slowly nice synths maybe id work on the percussion its at 4:00 and still not much change in percusssion and when it does it kinda cheapens the sound same with the one melody at around 4:30-5:00it sounds a little too happy but all the other sounds are nice good quotes maybe a couple little breaks that toss in new percussive elements just a couple suggestions
Yellow Warrior
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Posted : Oct 5, 2005 23:06
Hey, thanks for that!!

@Facehead: The happy lead you're talking about, are you saying its cheezy? Actually, i head it on its own, it sucks but with the other lead it sounds alright no?
But Thanks again man, i will try those suggestions!!!

@Bar Litman: I think the link's working man. Cheers for checking it out though. Try again!

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FaceHead
FaceHead

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Posted : Oct 6, 2005 01:57
ya other leads are good yes that one was cheesy and it just doesnt fit good with the other one but you got a great start you should hear my first track its awful this is a good basis for things to come
Yellow Warrior
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Posted : Oct 6, 2005 11:33
heheh..
Yeah man, i think i should change that lead. Thanks for your time!           Rather than feeling that you're about to have the rug pulled from under you, let me teach you how to dance on a flying carpet
illusions
Erebus
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Posted : Oct 6, 2005 21:55
nice going bharath!

you've come a long way

just had a listen to the track and heres what i think - bass is sounding quite powerful, but it gets monotonous. you definitely need a lot more breaks - and atmosphere/wooshes leading in/out of them. that will make your track "pulse" add some more layers of fx, maybe even 1 or 2 more leads.

im a big fan of long intro's. good work, keep it up !

boom!
Yellow Warrior
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Posted : Oct 13, 2005 02:34
Thanks for all your help man Illusions!
Could not have done it without you!

I've made some changes to my leads, and added a couple of breaks, swooshes and some more effects. Hopefully i have made some progress.

Oh, also managed to come up with an artist and track name!

Can someone Please give me some feedback?
Here's the Link -

http://www.soundclick.com/wakantanka

Thanks for all your help!

Best Wishes,
Bharath.
          Rather than feeling that you're about to have the rug pulled from under you, let me teach you how to dance on a flying carpet
FaceHead
FaceHead

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Posted : Oct 13, 2005 04:58
sweep in the beginning nice leads better i still am not feeling the perc that comes in at 2:50 maybe just too loud and also in that section it becomes a little repetitive but over all this track sounds much better maybe put a couple more synths over these new melodies they dont have to be constant but just a spot here and there the buil was nice but the perc after that is too loud as well i think its a tabla sounds much better but your parts go too long without a change bring in some new elements every every 32 or 64 beats to spice it up

but yes much progress

-facehead-
shroomz
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Posted : Oct 13, 2005 11:34
@Bharath ..
The intro is rocking and as Benny said the punch is powerful .. Nice ..
Nice Fx sample around 2:50 .. Love those onez ..
Some samples towards the end are a bit loud ..
Thats what I feel .. Consider me the end user who knows a bit of music ..
I Love it ..
Keep blasting those speakz ...

Cheers ..           'Let's meet on the Otherworld - let's speak about the unspeakable'
Yellow Warrior
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Posted : Oct 13, 2005 12:28
Hey Facehead, Thanks for the review man!
Yeah, will work more on the percussion and the arrangement.
Yeah, i know i should make more changes,add some breaks. but the ideas are not coming to me! I'll work on them this weekend. Have to get those fuckin things right!
and effects.... my cpu usage is enormous, have to transfer some parts to audio and then see if that makes a difference. Although, before that i want to do some automation work, but want to fix these little bits up first.

I will make the changes by this weekend and get back to you if thats not a problem.
Thanks again my friend!

@Shroomz, Thanks for your post as well man. Yeah i heard the track again this morning at work and it is a bit too loud.
Will fix it!

Thanks again for your time!

Anyone else?

Best Wishes,
Bharath.
          Rather than feeling that you're about to have the rug pulled from under you, let me teach you how to dance on a flying carpet
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