any advice on this progressive track im working on ??
COMET SHELL
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Posted : Nov 15, 2011 00:42:18
hi guys, iv been trying to make some progressive psy, and would love some tips and advice. here is a sample of what iv been working on. thanks in advance.
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Posted : Nov 15, 2011 05:15
its a cool track for sure, but you have some weird low frequencies and popping going on.
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Posted : Nov 15, 2011 09:16
^ what he said and it needs a bit more groove to it. And add some sounds/ leads. It is still a bit empty.
Make the bass pattern a bit different so it really grooves and add some percussion then add some atmosphere.
good luck!
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Posted : Nov 15, 2011 09:43
thanks guys, ill try to fix it and complete. thanks for the advice.
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Posted : Nov 16, 2011 01:09
hi guys iv taken your advice and tryed to remix the track abit. let me know if its an improvement. thanks agin guys
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Posted : Nov 16, 2011 23:36
the bass sounds much better than the first one for sure
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COMET SHELL
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Posted : Nov 17, 2011 11:01
thank you. i made the first one in my headphones late at night and didnt have a listen on my speakers, i was in the zone where everything sounds amazing ha ha, then in the morningf i listened and could hear the bass and other sounds were not good. im still not even sure if i like the second one either now
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Posted : Nov 18, 2011 02:20
yea sounds ok, but first the sounds are very predictable, if u know what i mean, you should surpirise more, make something else, like the bass, has same note changes,, make new flowz there, make flowx every 3/4th, or 2/3, 1/7th or whatever or whatever instead of every 1/16 or something, break it up more, try something on your percussions, like swing or some fx , like delay, flanger etc, wet it up, maybe use some voice sample to spice it up, sounds pretty decent , keep at it,peace
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Posted : Nov 18, 2011 11:43
thanks minus, i will work on the points you made. to be honest iv gone off this track at the moment. thanks for listening
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Posted : Nov 20, 2011 15:23
i dont think im going to do much more with this project, but if anyone wants the flp and wants to do some stuff with it, your more than welcome.
