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Sputer
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Posted : Mar 8, 2003 15:43
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Gilad Refael
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Posted : Mar 8, 2003 15:51
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the track is nice, well built. the melodie in the end sounds like it was taken from mario brot.  plus it doesn't go well with the beat.
keep working im sure you can come up with something really good.
gilad.
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Sputer
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Posted : Mar 8, 2003 16:01
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LOL
i didnt like the end also...
but anyway.. I w'ont fix it now, will wait 4 new PC.
and than i'll take the things more serious 
..."Be yourself, let your conscience guide you...
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Gilad Refael
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Posted : Mar 8, 2003 23:44
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if you've made all this with the current computer why can't you continue until you recieve the new one
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BrainStorm
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Posted : Mar 10, 2003 11:20
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very nice beginning synth line and panning snares p.up
the bassline i dislike - too usual and nearly the same through all the track :*)
percussions are good!
sfx are good too
coolish tweaking synth at 2.30+
and then come the sounds which reminds me of some band, but i cant remember where i heard it before
break at 3:15.. i liked the synth p.up, but disliked what came after - the bassline isnt sounding nice together with the synth.. though at 4.40+ it becomes better and it goes ok until the end, just the synth in the end should have more volume i guess
best luck, please let me know when the track will be done... i feel like checking it then!
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nexus_crawler
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Posted : Mar 10, 2003 15:29
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i like your bassline but i dont think it sounds right with the snare in that rythm loop (just a personal thing maybe)..
also the track sounds out of pitch at times, it seems like some of your synths are too high i think...
not a bad track overall though 
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Sputer
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Posted : Mar 10, 2003 15:36
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10x about ur little reviews
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Follow your heart, not the people around you"... |
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