Another darkpsy track - 148 bpm - criticism appreciated
Taii
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Posted : May 18, 2010 01:32:57
here it is:
after working on it a long time and listening to it again and again, i already hate it so i dont know what should i change there or anything. so any comment would be nice thx
http://soundcloud.com/taii
meat battery
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Posted : May 20, 2010 08:00
Hey man good track!
Lead @ 1.44 is a bit stuttery and awkard to begin with but turns out well. Really enjoyed 4.50 onward.
There's a lot of breaks in the song, some work well other's kinda detract and take away from the flow. Spicing up the background percs with a little reverb and panning could add a lot.
Taii
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Posted : May 20, 2010 13:15
thanks
yeah, i know theres a lot of breaks, thats probably because im trying to avoid it being monotonous and boring, but i dont know which are working well or not anyway i'll try to make less of them next time..
so i dont know what should i change there or anything. so any comment would be nice 
thx
anyway i'll try to make less of them next time..
