Taii
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Posted : Feb 9, 2010 12:13:58
Hello.
Im bored editing this 564126 times, so at least id like to know whats wrong. thanks.
antidentity
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Posted : Feb 9, 2010 20:10
im listening right now. the lead sounds like its sort of in the back of the mix.. maybe bring it closer to the front? Maybe some transitional sounds every 16 or 32 bars or so? also i don't hear any snare... aside from that it doesn't sound bad. maybe ad some more elements to it, like another lead sound or something? keep it up =]
Taii
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Posted : Feb 10, 2010 14:56
hi, thanks, um, what does "back of the mix" mean? is it too quiet? also which lead? ..and whats transitional? sorry:)) yeah i think another lead or some another sounds should be added, but every time i try i have no idea what or where .. thanks for comment.
Scolopendra
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Posted : Feb 10, 2010 15:44
The overall sound is good, but as antidentity mensions, you could bring the leads more to the front.. and the intro could use some atmospheric elements, maybe some dark drones or pads. Also as mensioned, some percussion or more drums would also fill out the landscape a lot!
Taii
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Posted : Feb 10, 2010 21:39
thanks for the comment:)
i still dont understand what bring leads to the front means. is it like make it louder..?
yeah i agree intro isnt too creative, and i already made some changes there, didnt upload it yet. i could try adding some pads there too. and im not sure what drones are:)
i also agree more percussion should be added, though i didnt want to put any snare there, maybe just because i cant make any snare sound good
thanks again
Taii
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Posted : Feb 19, 2010 20:03
hello, i tried to change something, add some percussion, automation and a pad. id like to know how to make that pad sound better (if it is a pad...)
i wanted to do more and better changes, but my headphones are broken and im not at home..
Taii
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Posted : Mar 2, 2010 14:01
..so ive discovered synth 1 and tried to learn something with it, and this is the result
i know theres some work to be done, but id like to hear some opinions.. thx
thanks.
..and whats transitional? sorry:)) yeah i think another lead or some another sounds should be added, but every time i try i have no idea what or where .. thanks for comment. 
