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mk47
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Posted : Nov 1, 2007 09:49
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mk47
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Posted : Nov 6, 2007 06:00
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hi .. no ones interested in my crappy track but ill bounce just this once anyway : P.. feedback , advice , tips ..anyone ? : )
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Mesq
Reality Pixie
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Posted : Nov 14, 2007 11:39
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Links expired, sorry didn't get a chance to listen  |
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MadScientist
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Posted : Nov 14, 2007 12:35
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how come your posts are offtopic? 
I'd like to check it, upload again mate 
 https://soundcloud.com/hazak
"Have you ever had that feeling where you're not sure if you're awake or still dreaming?"
"Hmm, yeah... All the time, man - it's called mescaline. The only way to fly!" |
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mk47
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Posted : Nov 14, 2007 13:13
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MadScientist
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Posted : Nov 14, 2007 13:41
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I guessed so, was just joking but nice one!
the track is already pretty nice...for my taste I would fill it up a bit more with some agressive background melodies or some single sounds that build a rythm, which go on thru the themes to glue them a bit 
same goes for the end imo...just turn it a bit straighter and do a break maybe before the end...voila
but thats just for my taste to give you an idea the other track is also very nice, but still really basic!
but overall good work mate...keep it up!
https://soundcloud.com/hazak
"Have you ever had that feeling where you're not sure if you're awake or still dreaming?"
"Hmm, yeah... All the time, man - it's called mescaline. The only way to fly!" |
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Mesq
Reality Pixie
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Posted : Nov 15, 2007 03:26
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Love the direction of your music and you are getting some nice sounds happening. Now work on your song structure a bit more and fill out with some fx and more percussive elements
Funky and foresty |
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