kabbalisticvillage
IsraTrance Senior Member
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Posted : Jun 29, 2010 17:03:42
so what im looking for u critics to tell me is about the overall sound(this is not mixed)and the song structure....tell me what im really doing wrong
vipal
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Posted : Jun 30, 2010 06:24
mix it, kick sounds way to loud (annoying) on my laptop, drums sound like a life drummer (kind of like it) but thre is space for more percussion. sounds at 2:40 need some attention (delays?). try some alternative structures (swap some pieces).
Midnight Sun
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Posted : Jun 30, 2010 07:41
what you are doing wrong is not doing a proper mix an expecting a critic about the sound, first mix it doing all your best and then we can tell you a good critic . about song structure in my opinion needs way more creativity, it gets boring. the fl slayer sound at 2:36 is very annoying to me and is no psichedelic at all. hope that helps you to improve! good vibes bro! ProtoDrive https://soundcloud.com/protodrive
. about song structure in my opinion needs way more creativity, it gets boring. the fl slayer sound at 2:36 is very annoying to me and is no psichedelic at all. hope that helps you to improve! good vibes bro! 
