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An Elusive Riddle of Infinite Emptiness - Windmill Projections
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lucidpicnic
Lucid Picnic
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Posted : Dec 29, 2008 18:24:27
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IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jan 7, 2009 02:06
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well i am preety hard with my critics 
In general both tracks sounds empty,propably because
THEY ARE empty.a full track mix i think should have much more channels playing than 5 or ten
1st.your first track finishes when its starting 
i would advice you to loop a loop and listen to it for an hour.all this time you could fill with more elements and
listen to it again and again,so it gets some interest.
Dont go str8 forward to the next meters till you are preety sure that the first is ready.
2.too much hard panning on the rythmics at 2nd track.
try to make a more complex mix.not to replay the already heard melodies.
Make some good and punchy kickbass mix to make the mix stand and fill it with shakers or other rythmics.
thats my opinion for a start.
waiting for new 
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pavaka
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Posted : Jan 8, 2009 18:08
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