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Amoeba vs Orgytime - New Track
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orgytime
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Posted : Dec 28, 2011 21:48:57
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psyraal
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Posted : Dec 28, 2011 21:52
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ierofante
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Posted : Dec 29, 2011 11:22
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Nice synths and chord stabs in the first minute - the melody they create is very nice.
The lead that comes at about 1.40 is too much cheese for me, it is a pity because the rest of the melodic parts of the song are pleasant and interesting (for example, at around 3 minutes).
The lead at about 4.40: marvelous.
Mixing and equalization is also nice.
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Nomad Moon
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Posted : Dec 29, 2011 11:55
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U guys feel like u're made for eachother 
Very nice one, altough i'm with ierofante on the second part of the track, and the last melodie also, i don't think its the melodie itself but the synth choice and probably its my taste, im not a big fan of pure saw type leads
other then that crystal clear, and nice full-on drive  |
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Fjantasma
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Posted : Dec 29, 2011 16:53
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even if im not that into fullon i enjoyed this track, nice melodies and all (although i agree with ierofante about the lead at 1.40, but i guess thats just about taste)
nicely done  |
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makus
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Posted : Dec 29, 2011 17:18
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aje
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Posted : Dec 29, 2011 19:13
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Wow, this extremely well done cheese!
And I also agree with everyone else, the part starting at 1:40 is a bit too much. If I had one criticism it would be that it sounds like 3 or 4 different parts that are kinda disconnected glued together into one track, but maybe thats what you are going for! Still, very solid and powerful sounding overall!
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UVBlast
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Posted : Dec 29, 2011 19:15
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orgytime
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Posted : Dec 29, 2011 20:32
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yeah makus, your where absolut right!
thanks for the feedback, also if i cant agree with the part at 1:40 ,
its short and good to my taste even if its just a 2 synth layered, sidechained and audiocutted lead 
i thought not about getting such negative feedback ahahah,
for me its still one of the best tracks amoeba/me have done.
@aje you are the smartest guy gg, it was exactly like this...
but with all my tracks gg.
cheers
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Nomad Moon
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Posted : Dec 30, 2011 00:32
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Must say i love keyboard work in the 3rd section, kinda new stuff |
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Upavas
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Posted : Dec 30, 2011 02:02
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knocz
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Posted : Dec 30, 2011 02:08
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You both know what you are doing, and you know your way around a synth and DAW.
There are lots of great elements and interesting sounds, and it looks like you were after this sound and were able to find it.
But I find some of the elements a little too distinct without purpose, where it doesn't gel good together.
Ok, you placed a cheesy lead at 1:40 (do what you want), but then it just disappears in a simple delay, removing it's context of the song.. If you listen to the song from the outside (hard to do since you produced it ), you hear the elements don't quite fit in as a whole.
I also find the intro to be a little mess. Work work work work
The midi notes are amazing, did you play them in real time, or is there a lot of mouse clicks in there?
As a personal taste, I think you could automate some more knobs during the heavier sections, bringing a higher expressiveness to those midi notes. One thing on that 1:40 section I'd like to hear is some note harmonics (some well placed low-fi distortions with a high filter resonance on just a couple of notes), and some master glitch effects here and there.
Don't take me wrong, I just expect (and demand) more from you guys, as I truly admire your work. I believe you can reach higher levels, that this track doesn't live up to your capabilities. Please show me more! Super Banana Sauce http://www.soundcloud.com/knocz |
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orgytime
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Posted : Dec 30, 2011 02:31
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the amazing solo is played by the magical fingers of amoeba
via keyboard... he is the man!
i sliced everything, put it together, made the presets and used
some parts of the solo for the main lead which i did in the end...
i also mixed in some other decent stuff amoeba made...
since amoeba is really busy, it was up to me to
arange and mix the track... quite similar to our first track,
which includes amazing keyboard as well
thanks for the feedback again. i dont understand comments
like "i expext more from u guys", since this is just our
second track... released nowhere lol. what do you expect
from us? from my side, i can tell you i gave my best. i dont
know it better or i dont can transfer my feelings better into
this music. i even asked makus for his opinio to help me
further with this... thanks again, makus!
so thanks for the other critics, the things you pointed out,
always where my weak spots and i try to get better...
cheers
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Obelizk
Amoeba
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Posted : Dec 30, 2011 03:23
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"extremely well done cheese!" made me laugh Aje haha
I actually really like the 1:40 part... like a lot
Orgytime did an awesome job putting together this song. It was originally just tons of sections, and it was getting so crazy. The sounds and mixing too, just awesome.
Yeah, the keyboard was played I think it would be really tough to plug in notes via midi with just clicks for something like this.
I'm glad you guys mostly like it haha, I hope to be less busy so I can work with Orgy on more songs. I wasn't even sure this song was going to be completed because I got so busy which sucks, but he pulled it together. massive props again!
And thanks everyone for feedback and glad you liked it!
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dj chichke
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Posted : Dec 30, 2011 13:42
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