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aloha friends of the workshop, im working on a new track & i would love to know your opinion bou
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Anyer
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jun 25, 2014 02:55:39
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knocz
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Posted : Jun 25, 2014 16:40
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Hi!
Amazing soundscapes, I wanna hear more from you!
Unfortunately for the first 2 minutes I would say the bass is off - not enough bass But then it all comes through, and yep it sounds nice Maybe could use a little more space between the notes, but it definitely wont be that that would drive someone away from this.
I wanna take some special things and listen to this loud.
@4:08 -> there goes the bass again.. but then it comes back
@4:20 -> that long lead.. it seems a bit repetitive.. maybe a bit of modulation on the vibrato amount / rate, or even a fast LFO with a low amount on the pitch
@5:02 Nice man! Long time since I heard this type of breaks in a tune, it really should come back
@9:06 - best part of the track IMO Make more! Always more!
Keep it up fellow!
  Super Banana Sauce http://www.soundcloud.com/knocz |
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