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				| AquaticNature 
 
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 Posted : Jan 29, 2009 03:00:10
 
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						| people need some reviews on my sound chek it on 
 www.myspace.com/aquaticnature
 
 need some help to inovate, get better, etc etc
 all the help I can get
 
 need to now what I can keep doin and things that don't, and what's missing to eheheheh
 
 peace people!!
 
 asta namaste
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				| Kane IsraTrance Junior Member
 
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				| jizy IsraTrance Full Member
 
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						| the tracks have got vision, sounds fresh like "aquatic nature" i understand what you are portraying... keep it up. i think some elents on your second track could be pushed more forward in the mix, as most of elements sound behind. but i aint gunna critze to much because practice makes perfect.
 
 good stuff
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				| jizy IsraTrance Full Member
 
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						| also fairly repettive seems like u got fed up, and just copied and pasted same section loops for the last 6mins of track hehe. |  
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				| AquaticNature 
 
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						| hello hello 
 very good tips....
 
 firts tank you for your good advices and positive vibes... i'll keep on working for sure... ehehehhe
 
 I like criticiszm only in a constructive way, for learning self develpment etc etc
 
 yeah the sounds start to get a litle repetitive, but I have a lack of ideias for that...
 
 how can I change that repetitive thing, more breaks? put some more effects at start and then put them clearly?? or just get new sound new grooves and getting them on the track??
 
 asta
 namaste
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				| phasetech Float
 
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				| AquaticNature 
 
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						| eheheheheh 
 I'm doing that daily, and allready learning a lot!!
 
 tanks man!
 
 asta
 namaste
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				| Crystalien IsraTrance Junior Member
 
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						| listening to "Peace" now... enjoyable synth intro.. followed by a strong, wide  bassy! The track overall sounds messed up sometimes, maybe you should put the vocals and some FXs in another places in the track.
 
 Like the synthetic changes around 3 min
   
 Morning morning !
  The "bird" screams at 4:54 are killah! ;p the track becomes really enjoyable around this time =)
 
 
 best wishes!
 pls try my trance: http://www.myspace.com/crystaliens
 thanks for your time, brother!
 
              Crystalien HEAVY METAL GOA
 http://www.myspace.com/crystaliens
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				| splinter Splinter / Kode Six
 
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						| ey,you should make better sounds...but that's something u learn along the way. 
 you should high pass your leads and sounds man they are overlapping ur kick n ass thats why u can't hear em.
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