knocz
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Posted : Dec 4, 2013 13:58
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Nicely done 
I think the kick+bass is a little too back in the mix, they should be more up front. Also, they sound a bit muddy, so bringing them up might not help.
On the kick, you've put a double kick every 8 beats, and I think it's too much. There should be a driving beat going on, putting people into a trance state, and this is constantly interrupting that flow. Also, All kick breaks sound the same, you could work a lot more on those.
The leads ideas sound nice, but you could put a lot more production into the tune, making the loops fade in and out instead of simply starting.
Some loops go on for a long time, you could use your nord to modulate them over time making them fluctuate, and transform from one sound to another. Or, load the loop in a sample and mangle with it there 
From 5:50 onward I don't feel anything new is coming, which might saturate the listener of listening to the same thing. At 6:53, you introduce a new lead sound, but it's playing the same note pattern that has been played throughout the tune. Try making different melodies, particularly for this one something that responds to the backing melody that we've been listening to all the tune -> like an answer to the track.
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