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Alajarvela - Disconnected (Suomisaundi?) my first song ready!

alajarvela
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posted : Nov 10, 2011 22:39:25

I know it's a bit short for regular psy but I felt that almost five minutes was more than enough. I'm actually having a guy mastering this so it's gonna be all polished in a week or two

what do you like?

dharmatronic
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Posted : Nov 11, 2011 14:11

hmmm... nice tunes and ideas here. I would work a little bit more in kick n bass to work better together; some envelope tweaking maybe? or just kick and bass eq? after 1'36 seems to be tighter but still need some fix.

I also miss some low freq audio depth. I think you have some room for working between 60hz and 120hz (IMHO).

great job!

=)

always learning...

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minus
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Posted : Nov 11, 2011 16:04

i dig some of the sounds in this like 1 min ,, and love the sounds at 3 , i would extend that part much longer,,, u got decent base to complete track on, and good points given by dhramatronics take those and get some ump in ur bass end, goood luck
bomz

Wizack Twizack
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Posted : Nov 11, 2011 17:03

cool ideas, keep fixing and trixing here. Did u use renegade alot?

cheers!

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knocz
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Posted : Nov 11, 2011 17:37

Nice one!

Apart from what said, I think you could raise teh release on the final lead synth (the saw layer), to make it a bit thicker.

I also believe you could work a little more on the transition starting at 4:20.. the beat just fades out. Make it a bit more interesting!

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Galaxy Machine
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Posted : Nov 12, 2011 09:11

i think this is a very solid bassline and the composition appears great. Though the voice samples are kind of funny i thought why not add in a laughing sample

Like "Please check your number ... Ha Ha Haaaaa"

Sisu!

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D_Access
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Posted : Nov 12, 2011 23:39

i think u should add some space to your synth (delay, reverb etc)

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