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Agua Minada
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Flubber
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Jan 28, 2012 17:22:44
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Jan 28, 2012 22:58
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Flubber .. Must tell you .. You are one of those i realy like here , You have this innocence and passion (In your music) . Diligence and motivation So each time i hear your tones theres somthing new in ,Somthing change , Somthing better , can see you work hard and thats the way to get your dream come true for sure .
Try heal/Change the bass .
More harmony of tools .
What vst you using there for the tripish scratch's ? .
I say 2 years of hard work to be on top !
Keep going m8 ..
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makus
Overdream
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Posted : Jan 28, 2012 23:20
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Nice forest track. Indeed bass could be a bit more powerful, kick - a bit quiter, percs - more diverse, but that's nothing. Story and transitions are much more important in such music, and you r definitely tripping in the correct direction  This is good. However what's bad that when I click in random parts in the beginning and the end I don't really hear any difference. Try to put more sense into noise - develop the story, express what is happening and why in details
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Midnight Sun
ProtoDrive
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Posted : Jan 29, 2012 01:00
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i dont really like the intro pad, i think you could work it more. i like kick but bass is a too low compared to it. great trippy sounds!. i think you can add something more to the 3 min break. percussion neds mor volume imo. i would say that you need to add more different synths but im not really in this kind of music so maybe it is that way always. sounding nice so far, keep it up !
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Flubber
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Jan 29, 2012 14:05
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Thanks guys i´m very happy with the feedback.
@cardinals- that´s Vanguard.
@Protodrive - the intro was just to add something in the begining, very minimalistic.
and i don´t know how to make decent breaks yet, you can listen to my first drafts of this track at www.soundcloud.com/flubber78.
@makus - you are right it is very repetitive, gona work more on that.
i´ve tried alot of basses and this is one i love the most, smoth sub stuff!
thank you all again for your kind words and sugestions.
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Flubber
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Feb 4, 2012 19:23
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Krskglstmpf
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Posted : Feb 5, 2012 14:49
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Icetoon
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Feb 5, 2012 19:17
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Nice track |
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