theseyh
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Posted : Mar 17, 2010 17:47:25
hi guys, i need some advices about what that track needs. and what's good&bad
exkor
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Posted : Mar 17, 2010 18:46
I say the track is good but in my opinion you need to make the kick stronger. give it more volume, at least +1dB.
Also from 2:31 to 3:15 there is too much repetition you need to make more variation.
At 3:44 the transition is too weak in my opinion. Make a 2 seconds silence break before you get into 3:44. Take all instruments out and just please leave the vocals delaying. Maybe a raise effect wold be good in these two seconds break.
In the part 5:06 and on you also need variation because it sounds a little too repetitive.
I understand that you are not making a fullon track where something different comes in every 16/8 but you need to make more variations in my opinion.
and i know that break part is weak and for variation is it needed for melodic parts or for rhym elements( clap, hats,...)