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Absent Professor - Deep Inside The Brain (142bpm Full Track)
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Tomos
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Posted : Jun 28, 2006 11:23
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Please give me some feedback, spent a long time with this track and learned a lot. My next is going to be even better.
Comments, questions and critisisms welcome.
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=DD654FEC675639CB
btw this is straight out of Cubase so there is no mastering. You may have to turn your speakers UP. Although you should be doing that anyway 
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Tomos
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Posted : Jun 29, 2006 21:51
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Anyone?? |
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Chaksa_
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Posted : Jul 3, 2006 18:38
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great track .
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Tomos
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Posted : Jul 3, 2006 20:44
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Woohoo, a reply! Thanks a lot.
All critisism welcomed - improvement is my goal. |
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cd302
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Posted : Jul 3, 2006 21:59
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it´s gettin´even better....your 2nd comment, how about that ?! ...ah...forget about..
track is well done, i think. but there´re some frequencies missing, i think. sounds like, there´s some sort of a whole in the lower, especially upper mids. as it sounds pretty clean, you could really try to add a few extra freqs there. buildup is pretty typical...works, but nothin special...
did u use filterenv on the bass ? doesn´t sound like that however. sounds pretty flat.
i also think, the hp on the drums is a bit heavy...don´t cut that much, i´d say.
hope u can work with that...will give it a second chance on my home stereo..
cd302
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Tomos
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Posted : Jul 10, 2006 03:31
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splinter
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Posted : Jul 10, 2006 06:19
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hey there,
first of all some of ur synths need a bit more low pass,they are heavy//blocking bass freqs//.
nice kick.
bass is ok...could use a lil something else.
all in all its an ok track...production is almost tight.
keep it up.
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Tomos
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Posted : Jul 10, 2006 10:34
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Thanks for the comments, I will look at the synth freqs. Do you have any suggestions on making the bass more interesting? Its currently dry, there are no effects on it. |
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gregi
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Posted : Jul 10, 2006 20:18
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nice track tomos! the rythmic elements are well done, the breaks are also very good! the bassline could have some more changes, its more or lose the same trough the whole song. the melodies are made with nice sounds but also very similar trough the song... all in all a nice track, i think a lot better as many things which are released by major labels nowadays... |
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RenderingRebel
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Posted : Jul 10, 2006 20:31
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Ill give you some critics if you give me some aswell ^_^
Dont really like the snare you use
Sounds are nice but some sounds just dont do it for me, they miss something i think
for instance the short arp you use in the beginning of the track, sounds a bit detuned
Some sounds seem to be not out of the rhythm
So overall the track is good but some sounds need some work. I can spot some preset sounds, its ok to use em i do so myself but you should tune em a bit more to fit em with the rest of your sounds
Keep it up! |
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big
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Posted : Jul 16, 2006 17:26
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NasCa
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Posted : Jul 16, 2006 23:31
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it's not available..
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