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Abomination Remix Contest - Secret Sands
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At0m
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Posted : Aug 6, 2011 22:07:34
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minus
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Posted : Aug 9, 2011 14:17
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the levels r too down, can hardly ear ,but maybe u keep it like that for master.2:20 the bass/kick panning is not working man,maybe u can automate that lead after that, same sound over and over, maybe pan it also,u building it to some nice basss changes, but seriously u got confused what to do there, instead of stopping, u should have built on it, with those bass changes, 4:25 like the bass,say ello to my little friend kool,but maybe old bass,whayever man,didint like the ending 5:45 ,,,, but overall some decent flow, build on it, and increase level up, and do more automation and get things moving,peace
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At0m
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Posted : Aug 9, 2011 22:17
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Hi Minus, you don't know how much i apreciate your critic 
Yes, the track is a little monotonus at times, you are right, and maybe my ideas on the pan wasn't so good after all, but this is progress and the next one i'm sure will be better and more moving.
Thanks again for listening and comment |
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dj chichke
Chichke
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Posted : Aug 10, 2011 03:46
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1. very nice remix! i didn't hear the others but i thinj you can win the contest.
2. your bass is phat and when other elemnts covers it it sounds cool. but in the parts that i clearly hear it i realize it's too dirty, i guess it's too much distorion or saturation. if i right so decrease the amount of the distortion. if i wrong so maybe close the filter little bit more and put eq on it to decrease some mid frequencies. but work carefully on it, because it's almost good and you don't want to ruin it.
3. you need better eq on your leads to get the maximum from each lead. you want them to shine on! for example the lead comes in at 6:07 is very dirty and not clear.
very nice again bro! good luck!
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At0m
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Posted : Aug 10, 2011 12:07
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Hi Dj chichke, glad you heard the track and gave an opinion
Yes, after listening the track some more times i can find flaws in it, but i can't correct them anymore for the contest.
If i win, which is not impossible but almost, i'll do some arrengements for the final mix
Thanks again for the comments.
Dj At0m aka Atomic Future |
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