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A rookie's work 152 Melodic dark

**Dripper**


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Posts :  42
Posted : Jul 1, 2006 20:42
Hello,
Well wanted reviews on my rookie work
Dark-152
Track name- Eat my shorts
PErsonally i think it needs more
STuff...!!
PLease add in ur suggestions
link---


http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=9B0E18E617839487

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PlutoDelic
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Posts :  244
Posted : Jul 2, 2006 01:34
ho ho

mate work on the intro, dont PAN it all the time

master the vocals a bit, decrease them.
increase the basslines

and dont move the kick, got no idea why but it really KICKS off

keep us updated           PSYKS
**Dripper**


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Posted : Jul 2, 2006 17:10
thxxx for the review...!!

bro can u temme more about moving the kick???           :The Dripper just DroppeD you:
PlutoDelic
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Posted : Jul 2, 2006 17:43
naaaah leave it, its perfect           PSYKS
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Triamera

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Posted : Jul 2, 2006 21:58
intro vocals need Eq .......
need to work on ur kick it doesnt fit in with the bass

also get some more atmospheres,pads,percusion etc

new synths also

track feels very dry & monotonous

thats all i can think of now

keep working and post a new link when ready
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psytheriatsunami
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Posted : Jul 3, 2006 01:06
i personally love the kick and bass but definitly hate those vocals!
0v3rd0s3d
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Posted : Jul 3, 2006 01:19
i like the kick but i dont like the first bass notes, i almost cant hear it :x (till 2:39)
u need to cut some subs from the vocals
twisted sounds ^^
keep going eheh           http://myspace.com/overthedose
**Dripper**


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Posted : Jul 3, 2006 16:28
Thanks a ton guyz for some nice reviews.... keepin em in mind i have come up with the second part of this track...!!!

duration -- 6.48 mins

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=3DD805DF1BB68261

hope u like it...!!!
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0v3rd0s3d
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Posted : Jul 3, 2006 17:48
hi there again
i prefer the other kick... i dont know this one seems very weird :x
the bass is better ^^ try to add more percussion to the track, some more hats and drums, that is just a personal taste
the vocals are really twisted ^^

keep them comming           http://myspace.com/overthedose
**Dripper**


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Posted : Jul 3, 2006 20:55
thxxxx for the reviews bro............waitin for more reviews



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**Dripper**


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Posted : Jul 5, 2006 20:15
waitin for more reviews for part 2 ............... please join in.....


http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=3DD805DF1BB68261



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