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A rookie's work 152 Melodic dark
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**Dripper**
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Posted : Jul 1, 2006 20:42
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PlutoDelic
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Posted : Jul 2, 2006 01:34
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ho ho
mate work on the intro, dont PAN it all the time
master the vocals a bit, decrease them.
increase the basslines
and dont move the kick, got no idea why but it really KICKS off 
keep us updated
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**Dripper**
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Posted : Jul 2, 2006 17:10
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thxxx for the review...!!
bro can u temme more about moving the kick??? 
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PlutoDelic
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Posted : Jul 2, 2006 17:43
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naaaah leave it, its perfect
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Triamera
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Posted : Jul 2, 2006 21:58
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intro vocals need Eq .......
need to work on ur kick it doesnt fit in with the bass
also get some more atmospheres,pads,percusion etc
new synths also
track feels very dry & monotonous
thats all i can think of now
keep working and post a new link when ready 
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psytheriatsunami
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Posted : Jul 3, 2006 01:06
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i personally love the kick and bass but definitly hate those vocals! |
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0v3rd0s3d
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Posted : Jul 3, 2006 01:19
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i like the kick but i dont like the first bass notes, i almost cant hear it :x (till 2:39)
u need to cut some subs from the vocals
twisted sounds ^^
keep going eheh 
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**Dripper**
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Posted : Jul 3, 2006 16:28
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0v3rd0s3d
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Posted : Jul 3, 2006 17:48
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hi there again 
i prefer the other kick... i dont know this one seems very weird :x
the bass is better ^^ try to add more percussion to the track, some more hats and drums, that is just a personal taste
the vocals are really twisted ^^
keep them comming
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**Dripper**
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Posted : Jul 3, 2006 20:55
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thxxxx for the reviews bro............waitin for more reviews
booom
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**Dripper**
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Posted : Jul 5, 2006 20:15
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