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A Progressive tune im working on...
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MarcosJr
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Posted : Jul 30, 2007 04:28
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by simple click in this link (myspace) the auto-play tune is a little bit of something im working on..
http://www.myspace.com/markussonmusic
its a kind of minimal progressive track... dont really know if this bassline is in correct volume or if its loud... any feedback will be reaLLy apreciated... |
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Galaxian
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Posted : Jul 30, 2007 14:17
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hey marcos... not bad at all... but a few things bothers me here...
1) that little arp (albino, i think?) is so annoying and i think its even not synchronised with other elements of the track...fix that please
2) you should work a little bit on rhythm layers. rhythm never changes and it supposed to change. add more hats, claps, shakers, its progressive right?
3) i couldn't hear bassline but i thing it's because of myspace stream.. i only heard its very 'fat'. so, have some changes and upload again! this is not bad, for a beginning
all the best m8! |
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MarcosJr
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Posted : Jul 30, 2007 17:06
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thanks a lot Galaxian! |
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RenderingRebel
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Posted : Jul 31, 2007 00:07
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I like the kick you use, nice and fat
You openhihat in the beginning should be a bit more cut in the low for my taste
Maybe some more mid in the bass, cause its kinda lost in the mix
Some sounds seem out of key..
I would try to make a bit more interesting melodys insteads of arps. Makes it sound a bit more mature
Hope this helps 
 SQL: http://www.myspace.com/sqlmusic
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Alias
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Posted : Jul 31, 2007 01:15
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i agree with galaxian!
minimal artists using a lot this annoying triangle arp(albino?).....sorry but its makes me headache
also i didnt liked the melody!
you need more drums/percussions
take it easy bro......im sure will improve your work!
good luck!
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pavaka
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Posted : Aug 1, 2007 00:14
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