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a new year, a new beginning, a new tune

para||ax
Para||ax

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Posted : Jun 18, 2009 15:46:28
Hey hey!

So after pushing things aside to work on other projects I decided to get things going again on the solo mission.

I have a new tune with a new mission and it's called "Blacklight Punk". With that I joined myspace once again and would appreciate any feedback or thoughts.

Rad!

Oh,

http://www.myspace.com/parallax01           http://biode.net
http://www.myspace.com/parallax01
gutter
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Posted : Jun 18, 2009 16:59

very nice overall sound and mix, it a bit static imho, could add some fm razors or harsh leads or TB arpeggio on a "climax" point at least, the bass is very fat and eats a lot of space in the mix leaving not much for other sounds and an aggressive lead to push more speed at the end would sit nice there always imho.. id say its fast groovy and somehow a fun track to listen on the dancefloor, a bit more acid sounds would make it perfect for its character .. m2c
para||ax
Para||ax

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Posted : Jun 18, 2009 17:24
Nicely! Points taken humbly. Will definitely consider your opinions in my next endevour. Thanks for tuning in!           http://biode.net
http://www.myspace.com/parallax01
lantiocho
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Posted : Jun 18, 2009 22:13
I agree with gutter on most things pointed out. Although this tune has an enormous energy from first second it lacks some variation on sounds used, which is not always a bad thing... Man that tune really made me starting moving on my chair and IMO will be perfect for dancefloor!!! Great mix as well... Keep it up!!!           www.myspace.com/antlabros
para||ax
Para||ax

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Posted : Jun 22, 2009 21:52
Hey! That's motivating lantiocho, much appreciated. And shot for the add.           http://biode.net
http://www.myspace.com/parallax01
Inreal

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Posted : Jun 23, 2009 01:29
I really like this concept, the combination of sounds with the constant drive is awesome. Very groovy, intense, psychadelic but also fun

As biggest pointer, I'd try to get a more balanced sound, in my opinion the bass is too loud and punchy.

You could also try playing with some variations, maybe even very short pieces of melody at an unexpected moment, or mix the bassline up now and then by using only off-beat bass, just to stir things up.

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