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A new track - opinions please
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mquirk1
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Posted : Jan 13, 2005 13:57
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Hey, well I'm a long time listener of psytrance and wanted to start making my own stuff, so this is my first shot at it. I'd really like some constructive crticism about anything, the song, production etc. I'm a bit of a newb so it'd really help.
It's here anyway:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/mquirkmusic.htm
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Hayez
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Posted : Jan 14, 2005 01:11
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Well  , you have a lot of ideas, some good some bad. choose the good and concentrate on the story. bass line is boring and isn't connected with the rest. there is still a long way until I'll be able to comment on the mix. keep working.
 "a new art came into my mind which only you can create, the Art of Noises, the logical consequence of your marvelous innovations." Russolo, 1913 |
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Kelmi
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Posted : Jan 14, 2005 17:40
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Some nice sounds in there mate!
The highs are kind of m issing?! Or is it just my shity system... |
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mquirk1
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Posted : Jan 15, 2005 03:28
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no you're right i think the mix (if you can call it that), is very bottom heavy. thanks for the comments. |
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Redlink
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Posted : Jan 15, 2005 19:09
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i can hear some good ideas in there, but i don't like the bassline and some of the stuff u do with your mix. one advice, listen to more psytrance. maybe listen to music will make you realize where do you fail.
keep working!
Have a good time all the time! |
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